Thursday, July 25, 2019

Q.7 Edit following story. (Every sentence has an error.)


                                              Rohit and a wounded man

It were a rainy day. Rohit did not went to school on that day as it was a holiday. He was read a newspaper. Suddenly he hear a squeaky voice out of his home. He ran out and see that an old man was lying on the road. He has been hit by a vehicle. A lot of blood were coming out of his body. He fear so much. He did not knew what to do. People started to gathered around the old man. He were trembling with fear.The voice of his teacher begin to echo in his ears. His teacher once say that people should help for injured people. He saw that many people was shooting the man in their mobile phone cameras. He become sad. Immediately he decided to helped the old man. He give a call to his father. His father at once reach there. They take the man in their car to hospital. After some days, the man were out of danger. In this way, he save a life.

Moral-- Those who are in need, should be helped.
















1 comment:

  1. Sir, what is the correction in 6th sentence "he has been hit by a vehicle". Please help me.

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